User talk:DebsFFM

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Happy editing! DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:15, 8 February 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Feel For Music (February 8)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:14, 8 February 2024 (UTC)

February 2024
Hello DebsFFM. The nature of your edits, such as the one you made to Draft:Feel For Music, gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

Paid advocates are strongly discouraged from direct article editing, and should instead propose changes on the talk page of the article in question if an article exists. If the article does not exist, paid advocates are strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. At best, any proposed article creation should be submitted through the articles for creation process, rather than directly.

Regardless, if you are receiving or expect to receive compensation for your edits, broadly construed, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:DebsFFM. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:. If I am mistaken – you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits – please state that in response to this message. Otherwise, please provide the required disclosure. In either case, do not edit further until you answer this message. DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:15, 8 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello,
 * I apologize for the confusion around this. I am part of the Feel For Music company, However every information on there can be found on the cited sources. I am confused as to where to disclose that information . Is there anything else wrong with my submission that I would need to change in order to to have that article created ?
 * Thank you DebsFFM (talk) 12:14, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * There are two different templates you can use. The one you have used above should be placed on your user page User:DebsFFM. Alternatively you can place the Connected contributor (paid) template on the draft/article talk page, or indeed you can do both. I can apply the templates for you, if you'd like? -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:57, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Yes that would be great thank you ! DebsFFM (talk) 12:59, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Done. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:39, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Great, am I now able to resubmit the article ? DebsFFM (talk) 14:09, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I got distracted doing some IRL stuff.
 * This draft has a fairly fundamental problem, in that it is all written from the point of view of the business. We don't want to hear what the business has to say about itself, we want to hear what unconnected third parties have said. This means that Wikipedia articles should summarise what multiple (3+) secondary sources that are reliable and entirely independent of the subject have said about the subject, writing with significant coverage and detail, and completely of their own volition. Your draft cites only one seemingly secondary source, the Campaign magazine article, but even that is written by your founder, so it is actually a primary source, and also not independent. Your first task therefore should be to find a few sources that meet the WP:GNG standard for notability, and summarise their coverage (in your own words, but without putting any additional 'spin' on things). HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 14:43, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
 * i understand, would it be the same if I just keep the one sentence in the introduction and all the credits ? adding more references for the credits would add 3+ external sources. DebsFFM (talk) 15:06, 13 February 2024 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Feel For Music


A tag has been placed on Draft:Feel For Music, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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