User talk:Decatombe

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Ways to improve NixOS
Hi, I'm ONUnicorn. Decatombe, thanks for creating NixOS!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. This page, at times, reads like an advertisement. In some places it is too technical and confusing for a lay reader. It should not be written in second person (using "you" language) because Wikipedia is not a how to manual. Also, the fact that you used primarily information from the official website in creating the article presents a problem, as articles should be written primarily from reliable secondary sources that are unaffiliated with the company, product, service, or person. Also, because such sources are not present in the article, it's difficult to tell if the topic meets Wikipedia's standards for "notability".

If you need help revising the page to address these concerns, let me know.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. ~  ONUnicorn (Talk&#124;Contribs) problem solving 17:20, 8 September 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the advices, I am aware of the problems you mention and sent a call to the community via the official mailing list to have the page improved.
 * I hope we can get all these issues fixed as soon as possible!
 * Decatombe (talk) 01:46, 9 September 2015 (UTC)