User talk:Deep sea coral/sandbox

I'm glad you got set up ArcherOlenska (talk) 16:59, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

I love all of this terrific information. The next step will be to really think about concision and organization. I would have the Olympics as its own subhead. You can think about her career as pre Olympics, Olympics and post Olympics.

Can the intro summary paragraph be shorter? Look at how https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mary_Lou_Retton is written. She is much more well known and her intro is only a few sentences.

You'll also want to work on the format. I can't wait to see the picture you got permission to use. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ArcherOlenska (talk • contribs) 21:48, 12 March 2021 (UTC)