User talk:Degenag/Transferable skill

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This is a good start. I have a few more suggestions to improve this section of the article:

Stick to third person voice and change "we" to "people" in this sentence: "Transferable skills are those skills that we acquire through either formal or practical education that lead the individual to the utilization of those skills in the workplace.

These two sentences repeat the phrase “are believed to be" so change the language in one of them: Transferable skills are those that are believed to be carried from the learning process into practical practice. These skills are believed to be vital in the academic success of a student as well as their ability to perform once in their employment roles post education.

I'm not sure I agree that self-control is a transferable skill. I think it's a SEL competency so I'd remove it from that list of skills.

Be wary of using extreme qualifiers. In this sentence remove “always” and replace with “often”: The emphasis is always on the traditional educational pillars of written and verbal communication as well as practical mathematical interpretation.

Revise this sentence to make it more neutral by revising "should be": However, there are additional skills that are expected of individuals as they enter the workplace that should be picked up throughout their education such as: interpersonal skills, self-management, problem solving, STEM, information technology and foreign language ability.[3] Lndmayg (talk) 15:29, 5 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the recommendations Degenag (talk) 20:25, 14 April 2024 (UTC)