User talk:Delchevn

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dirigible Cloud Toolkit (May 11)
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&mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 13:31, 11 May 2014 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Dirigible Cloud Toolkit (December 13)
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Param Mudgal talk? 15:52, 13 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dirigible Cloud Toolkit (February 20)
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Arthur goes shopping (talk) 09:04, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Dirigible Cloud Toolkit‎
Dear Delchevn: I saw your edit summary, wanting to know how to get an article about an open source project accepted. Although Wikipedia is "free" in that anyone can help to build it, and the result is freely available, the community has developed by consensus a set of policies about what should be included, and you have come upon two of these: (1) articles can't be seen to be promote one product over another, and (2)article topics must have been written about in published books, magazines, newspapers, or their online counterparts with editorial control. Press releases by the developers, blog, forum and wordpress postings don't count. This means that new software has to wait for reviews or featured articles in computer magazines, etc., before an article will be accepted. It looks as though this is beginning to happen for this product: the InfoWorld and SD Times articles have a small mention of the toolkit. The Jax article, however, seems to indicate that Dirigible hasn't been created yet, and the others appear to be company announcements.

About the advertisement problem: try to be as factual as possible - for example, instead of saying something is "fastest ever" (which will only be true for a while...), instead find a published source which compares it to other similar products. For example, "CPU magazine has reported that at the time of its release in 2014 this toolkit performed 20% more efficiently than the fastest of the competing toolkits, ZeppyCloud" (okay, I made that up).

The feature list makes it seem as though this product does everything in the world, because it isn't specific; for example, "Web content" - what about it? Do you mean that it includes an HTML editor? Or helps you set up a web server? Leave out the "and many more..." Also, more information in the history section would be good, for example, the release date of the product.

I have one more suggested area for improvement - please remember that Wikipedia is an encyclopedia intended for use by the general public. Although technical details are often needed in an article like this, the first few sentences should make sense to an educated person who is not a software developer. For example, the article doesn't explain that this is about creating computer software. I would suggest replacing the word "leveraging" with something which explains more clearly what you mean.

Okay, sorry to have been so long winded. I hope this helps.&mdash;Anne Delong (talk) 13:47, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dirigible Cloud Toolkit (March 2)
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Onel5969 (talk) 00:27, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dirigible Cloud Toolkit (August 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chris troutman was:

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Chris Troutman ( talk ) 22:56, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Dirigible Cloud Toolkit concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Dirigible Cloud Toolkit, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Draft:Dirigible Cloud Toolkit


Hello, Delchevn. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Dirigible Cloud Toolkit".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 13:57, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eclipse Dirigible (January 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ringbang was:

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Ringbang (talk) 20:01, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eclipse Dirigible (March 26)
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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  22:06, 26 March 2018 (UTC)