User talk:DemonsandLions

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Peer Review
In reviewing your assigned article I have the following suggestions on what could be improved:

The lead could possibly be expanded to provide details about specific techniques and tools used by SMI. Natural language processing, sentiment analysis, and social network analysis.

The clarity of the article could be improved to make it more readable and easier to follow. Breaking up longer paragraphs and using heading to organize content.

The article could use more up to date information. The information in the article is older and their have been many developments in the field of social medical intelligence. The article could be improved with more recent research and developments.

The additional of of specific case studies or examples or organizations using social media intelligence could help to illustrate the benefits and drawbacks.

Further development on ethical considerations. The article mentions ethical considerations surrounding social medical intelligence, it could delve deeper into this and provide guidance.

~ SadPandaBear (talk) 17:51, 18 February 2023 (UTC)