User talk:Dene45

Parabens
Can you take a look at the signficant changes that I made to parabens? I know you've already seen some of them and corrected my mistakes in the spellings of chemical names (thanks!). To tighten up the article, I've removed quite a bit of material that seemed only tangentially relevent such as the stuff about grape seed extract and much of the commentary. I've also added several references and material from them. Please let me know what you think. --Ed (Edgar181) 16:29, 28 September 2006 (UTC)

Hello Dene,
Thanks for jumping into the parabens article. Also, my name represents my love for organic food. Also, I am very much for preservatives, as they are very necessary to inhibit gram-positive bacteria, gram-negative bacteria, and fungus. Also, please leave comments on the talk page instead of the user page next time. The user page is just for me to leave comments on. I look forward to reading more of your edits in the future. Thank you Dene. --Organic Flavor 17:47, 6 October 2006 (UTC)

Note: I would like to know what you think about the parabens controversy section now. I think it explains in great detail the factuality of parabens in the marketplace. Before the section was just vague sentences. Now it is to the point with great commentary. I think it is better now than it was before. It has less sentences but with greater details. I prefer the current literature to the past versions. Before it was boring to read compared to the dramatic tone of the section now. --Organic Flavor 18:27, 6 October 2006 (UTC)

I think that section reads very well. Thanks for your contribution. Dene 6.10.06

"Hi"

The parabens article is close to completion now. Unlike other preservative articles, the parabens article is most encyclopedic. Though, the "synthesis" section could use a better explanation of the paraben manufacturing process (step by step process) along the necessary reference or references. Your contributions would be most appreciated with the correct analytical sentences -- explaining the synthesis process. Thanks for helping with your clarifications to the parabens article. --Organic Flavor 17:19, 7 October 2006 (UTC)