User talk:Denizb33

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Hello, Denizb33

Thank you for creating Patricia Lauber.

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Blythwood (talk) 20:27, 17 November 2019 (UTC)
 * Also, one aspect of concern was that the article maybe tried to cover too much. It's generally best in writing an article, especially a first one, to focus on keeping it short, with properly-formatted references at the end of every sentence documenting every single fact in the article without exception, no sentences that aren't referenced. There was a paragraph-I've deleted it-that to me felt too much like close paraphrasing of the sequencing and structure of the Wellesley source–in general I always say it's never necessary to include every fact in citations–people can always click over to them if they want to know more, and doing so often is the point when editors get too close to copying a source. Hope that makes sense! Blythwood (talk) 20:37, 17 November 2019 (UTC)

Thank you!
Thank you for all your help! Those are all great points to keep in mind for my next edit. Denizb33 (talk) 03:28, 4 December 2019 (UTC)