User talk:Denmum/sandbox

Peer Review - Week 8
Hi!

This is a really interesting article topic. I haven't heard of Bing Liu's research beforehand so it was a really interesting read. I don't have too much background knowledge on Liu's research topics, but it was still really interesting getting insight into his work. The topic I'm working on (data sanitization) is closely related to data mining so it was interesting to read about his research projects devoted to these topics. Since your work is adding on to an article, I can see why the sections in the draft are just extensions of what is already there. However, I think that the lead section for the orignial article is pretty short, so I think it could also be added on to along with the additional information on his research projects. The structure of what is going to be added is clear and effective in conveying Bing Liu's contributions. Although, I think that it could be helpful to start off the first paragraph detailing Liu's work before getting into the specific terminology so that the reader has an immediate connection between the topic and Liu's research. I think the article is going in a good direction and it'll definitely help improve on what is already on Wikipedia!

Thisismyusername31 (talk) 15:46, 10 April 2021 (UTC)