User talk:DerLenker

Hi DerLenker,

Based on what I see from your starter article, it appears that you did your starter article focusing on the "Early Life" section of Kōbō Abe. Your opening sentence does catch my attention as a reader, and you cover important information pertaining to his childhood and how that has influenced his surrealist writing style. You're page overall is very organized, however there could be more content in the career section. A section from your article that flows well is the quote that you use from the 1978 interview, I think this helps show how his childhood has influenced his work. A section that needs some improvement is the "Poetry" section, all of his works that are listed are abundant, while this section only has two. I suggest to highlight major works he has done so it doesn't get lengthy and look awkward when you get this section. You're writing is in a neutral view, I didn't notice any bias comments. I did not notice any grammatical errors. As for the area that needs expansion, I mentioned this earlier I think what needs fixing is the ares that you haven't focus on in your starter article which are the career section and the lists of his works. I noticed that you referred to the same source a couple of times in the same section, my only suggestion here is to incorporate other sources too if possible. Great job so far looks great!

-santosm8 Martina