User talk:DerbyCity2014

Soul music
I know you're not "new" exactly, but please read WP:verifiability, WP:neutral point of view, and try to use encyclopedic language rather than the sort of prose found in tabloid newspapers. Thanks. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:25, 6 September 2014 (UTC)

Twenty-Five Miles
I suspect that this edit is purely an editor generated view point, rather than an encyclopedic enhancement. As noted above, please read What Wikipedia is not to avoid similar mistakes in the future. Broadly speaking, Wikipedia is not a suitable vehicle to try out any budding music journalism style of writing. Thanks,

Derek R Bullamore (talk) 22:48, 21 June 2016 (UTC)