User talk:Derek Landwehr

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tom Law (Wichita Athletic Promoter) (September 15)
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Dan arndt (talk) 06:35, 15 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you Dan I appreciate the feedback! I am actually new to Wikipedia and this is the first article that I have done. This was actually an activity for my graduate school class trying to help expand information about local and community history. Wasn't sure how to keep an article private as all that we really need to do is send in screenshots and not send a link of the actual article. I plan on adding new material to the article as this version was rushed, as a future historian I can appreciate wikipedia being thorough about having multiple sources and I appreciate your work!
 * -Derek Derek Landwehr (talk) 14:59, 15 September 2022 (UTC)