User talk:DerikWP/

Azurashi Peer Review II
Hi DerikWP,

I've added some comments to your sandbox page. I think you're doing a consistently good job of cleaning up the article. Most of my suggestions have to do with typos and sentence structure. Also, I suggested defining certain acronyms used in the text (or linking to their respective Wikipedia pages), because I'm assuming the article should be easily understandable for any individual. Anyways, overall, the article is looking much better than before, so keep it up!

Azurashi (talk) 22:09, 3 April 2016 (UTC)