User talk:Destiny Hartanto/Stephanie Avakian/Bibliography

Hi, nice work on your article so far! It seems like you're updating the article with information about her recent work as a director of the SEC. This seems like pretty important information and you've got a really nice start developing some text to add it. I have two suggestions about what you might do next. First, I think it would be good to integrate what you wrote based on the new sources that you found with the material on the current version of the article. Second, I would look for additional secondary sources about her term as SEC director. The information you found in SEC press releases is of course reliable, but additional secondary sources might provide useful interpretation or background information in addition to the press releases. You can also keep adding more information from the sources you already found.

Overall, it's really cool to see you adding new information about such an important subject. I'm really excited to see how your article develops!

Groceryheist (talk) 23:43, 24 January 2021 (UTC)

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Hey, you have received helpful peer reviews from ( link) and  ( link). I encourage you to carefully read their reviews and gather ideas about how you'll improve the article next. said that it seems like you might be able to add more information and I agree. suggested adding a section on her early life and that sounds like a great idea if you can find a reliable source. As I said in my feedback earlier, I think that finding additional secondary sources about her tenure as head of the SEC seems like a good idea. I think that financial newpapers and magazines like the Wall Street Journal or the Financial Times might be good places to look for a bio article. I think that if you can develop one or two additional paragraphs of information about her background or more details about her significant actions as SEC director then you'll be on track to improve this article from a wp:stub to a wp:start-class article.

Next, I suggest you take a look at my page on polishing your article for ideas for your next round of work on this project. I especially think that doing things like adding wikilinks, "also see" links, categories, and external links are good things to do when polishing an article. I also suggest that you spend some time carefully copyediting the information you've already added to make it as easy to read as possible while maintaining an wp:encyclopedic tone.

Please reach out to me when you'd like more feedback on your article and you feel like you might be getting close to being ready to publish it. Nice job so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing it when it's nearly done!

Groceryheist (talk) 19:43, 4 February 2021 (UTC)