User talk:Detefabel

Welcome!
Hello, Detefabel, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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More notes
Hi! Here are some more notes.


 * Lead
 * This needs more sourcing to back up claims. The sources used don't seem to back up the claims per se. You have two sources that use the "/", but this in itself doesn't necessarily back up the claims that this is widely used - you need a source that specifically states this.
 * I've tweaked the writing some to better fit Wikipedia's style.


 * Transfeminism In Relation To Trans Identities
 * This needs a bit more editing for editorializing - I've done some tweaking, but this needs a little more work here and there. Also, some of this is a little technical - is it possible to put some of this into more of layman's terms?

I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:24, 12 December 2018 (UTC)