User talk:Dettedgui

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Hi, thanks for message. If you post an article it will be assessed as it stands. If you don't want that to happen, you should write it as a draft. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. It is now Wikipedia policy that biographical articles about living people must have independent verifiable references, as defined in the link, or they will be deleted. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to you or your organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what you claim or interviewing you.
 * you gave some web links at the bottom, but they were not in-line so we can't tell what fact each is supporting. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls. Those I checked were not independent third-party sources but rather sites quoting or interviewing you. You are not an acceptable source for an article about you.
 * it's unclear how you meet the notability criteria yourself, being an agent isn't notable, and even if the players are notable, that doesn't make you notable. No evidence either that your awards are notable, they aren't linked to Wikipedia articles
 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: was the first Sephardic Jew practicing as a Hockey Agent in the world... Accomplishment... outstanding young jewish entrepreneur with outstanding potential.
 * You have an obvious conflict of interest. If, after reading the information about notability linked above, you still believe that you are notable enough for a Wikipedia article (and that there is significant coverage in reliable, independent secondary sources), you could, if you wish, post a request at Requested articles for the article to be created. See also guidance for editors with conflicts of interest and writing about yourself.

This isn't social media, you can't just say what you like. Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. You must also reply to the COI request above Jimfbleak - talk to me?  13:42, 19 April 2018 (UTC)