User talk:Devashree818/Hydropower in the Mekong River Basin

Location of added content--after "Environment Impacts"
Adding a section on social impacts Devashree818 (talk) 17:23, 21 March 2022 (UTC)Devashree818

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 * The first sentence should begin with "Social impacts..." Please revise.
 * The second sentence: Source #2 (Baird) discusses PTSD in the context of the broken dam. Write one sentence that summary this case study.
 * Source #5 might not be necessary, since it is only a report. We need academic sources.
 * To ditto what User:Peruan00 mentions, I think the structure of this paragraph requires significant revisions. You can start with a topic sentence that refers to some key social problems such as food securities and livelihood securities. Then you structure the contents to these two points. Other issues like PTSD should only be mentioned in the case of the broken dam.

This reading has references to fish reduction and changes in social customs: Johnson, Andrew Alan. “The River Grew Tired of Us: Spectral Flows along the Mekong River,  Download The River Grew Tired of Us: Spectral Flows along the Mekong River, ” HAU Journal of Ethnographic Theory 9, no. 2 (2019): 390–404.

You might also want to use some sources about the impacts on Lower Mekong. E.g.: Cosslett, Tuyet L., and Patrick D. Cosslett. Water resources and food security in the Vietnam Mekong Delta. Cham: Springer International Publishing, 2014.

Please take some more time to work on this paragraph. And let me know via email you might need more time before moving it live. Please reply Yes to acknowledge that you read my message. Thanks. Hieup (talk) 03:10, 6 April 2022 (UTC)hieup yes Devashree818 (talk) 16:47, 6 April 2022 (UTC)Devashree