User talk:Devin 40/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
The second comma you removed was actually needed. Also, your edit summary contains errors. One, there's no apostrophe in "commas" - don't ever use an apostrophe to indicate a plural! And two, be sure your subject and verb are in agreement ("was" should be "were").

It's too late to fix the edit summary, but you should definitely put back the second comma. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:44, 21 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Your second revision is much better. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:11, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
There are several problems with your submission. One, the first source doesn't appear to come from the library or electronic databases. You should look for another source. Two, your excerpts from the sources don't relate to the excerpts from the article. In other words, the sources aren't relevant to the specific sections you want to use them for. You should go back to the timeline, read steps 4 and 5 carefully, and revise your submission within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:26, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * If you still intend to finish this assignment, you should post a revision as soon as possible. See my comments above. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:09, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * You're out of time. I'm just going to grade what you've produced for this assignment up to this point. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:53, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead
You must choose an article that needs a lead. Do it as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:13, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * The lead looks good, but you put it in the wrong place. It should be in the sandbox, not the talk page. Move it to the sandbox and also add it to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:50, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the lead to the article. You should move it down below the "Multiple Issues" banner and also delete the "Lead Missing" template. I explained how to do this in class on Wednesday. Do this in the next three days. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:48, 28 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw that you fixed the problem. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 16:21, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

LEAD
The IAFL is the Irish American Football League. It is an amateur American football organization in Ireland. It was founded in 1984, and it has two conferences which consist of 23 teams competing in the Shamrock Bowl Conference, IAFL-1 and IAFL-2. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Devin 40 (talk • contribs) 00:11, 5 April 2018 (UTC)