User talk:Devitee/sandbox

Really good article, you've clearly done you're research. I think you should consider expanding your article to cover topics such as ways to help people deal with physical abilities. Here's a website I found containing some of that information. https://www.lds.org/topics/disability/list/physical-disability?lang=eng--Sgobeshia (talk) 16:40, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey, I thought your post was very informative. To make your article more detailed I think you should add the symptoms of young children which can be found on this website: http://www.extension.org/pages/58555/physical-disabilities:-signs-of-concern#.VD1OyPnF-So. I think it would also be relevant to talk about depression associated with having physical disabilities as shown on this web page: http://www.hindawi.com/journals/arthritis/2013/525761/ --Ramya24 (talk) 16:49, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, great article! Here is a link that may help you expand on campaigns and detailed information about persons with physical disabilities: http://www.cfpdp.com/ Also, here is a legal website for law in Canada (if you want to relate it back to Canada): http://www.esdc.gc.ca/eng/disability/index.shtml --Rubymt (talk) 17:32, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I really enjoyed reading this article. This is a serious issue even in Canada, but there are changes being made. I think you could talk more about what is being done. I have included the link to the website for Accessibility for Ontarians with Disabilities. http://www.aoda.ca/ The second link is to the Ontario Disability Support Program http://www.mcss.gov.on.ca/en/mcss/programs/social/odsp/. Cool article, once again! --Thulianpink111 (talk) 17:46, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Your article is very informative. To improve it even further, I'd suggest going deeper into detail and talking about popular and common disabilities. For example, you can talk about cataract for visual impairments http://www.allaboutvision.com/conditions/cataracts.htm. You can also talk about Parkinson's disease which has an effect on one's speech, movement, balance etc http://www.parkinson.ca/site/c.kgLNIWODKpF/b.5184077/k.CDD1/What_is_Parkinsons.htm. --Nehalchauhan96 (talk) 00:03, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Your article was very effective and interesting. You have found a lot of great information and really good resources. I have found some resources to help you expand on your article. You might want to expand on some of the types of the physical disability. Here are the cites I have found that you might want to use. http://www.neads.ca/en/about/projects/inclusion/guide/pwd_01.php http://www.extension.org/pages/58555/physical-disabilities:-signs-of-concern#.VEh6rvnF-So Yalini47 (talk) 03:49, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello! I appreciated your great details in the article. I found a source from the NCBI (The National Centre for Biotechnology Information) that conducted a study on pregnant women and infections during the length of their pregnancy and whether the child is prone to being diagnose with Cerebral Palsy. http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/24117888. Also another general link of the website 'Body and Heath' giving a general overview of what cerebral palsy is. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Beauty4ashes7 (talk • contribs) 21:52, 23 October 2014 (UTC)