User talk:DiaEdie/sandbox

I edited a small portion on prostitution. I hope I am doing this correctly.

Review
Hi Diana, I think that you have some great information on your topic so far. I know that this is just a starting point but some suggestions I have would to be to make subsections, I felt while all of your information was important and useful it could have been broken up in to different sections. Other than that I would just like to see some citations for the information you have. I had a hard time adding mine at first, let me know if you need any help! Fletchal (talk) 07:40, 18 November 2019 (UTC)Alijah Fletcher

Peer Review
Diana, I think you picked an extremely interesting topic to start off with. I think that the information added to both sections you plan on adding to are going to be very useful when added to the article. I do worry, though, that the section on Prostitution is extremely long. Maybe think about sectioning off this portion into several subsections under the umbrella of prostitution. To me, the article feels more difficult to read if it is one huge block of text. It seems to me that you did a great job at keeping your voice neutral while writing this information and you use your sources well. Exoticgiraffe (talk) 10:52, 21 November 2019 (UTC)