User talk:Dianacese

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Feedback on your article
Hello Dianacese, Thank you for writing your article in your sandbox! I have read the article and would like to give some feedback to improve your article to Wikipedia standards and customs. While your tutor will judge it content wise, I will look if it meets the quality standards we have on Wikipedia. I standard look for a series of subjects that need improvement or are okay. I hope you can implement this feedback to your sandbox article before our next meeting. Thanks! Romaine (talk) 16:15, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Intro sentence: Please avoid the word "term" and rewrite first half of this first sentence. To me is not clear if you intended this as a start of a new article, or expansion of an existing article.
 * Links: Please add more links to keywords, including "ownership", "traditional economy", and others.
 * Headers: As I do not understand how you intended the article, I can't say much about it. In general: headers are needed in an article, because they provide readers structure and understanding what a section is about.
 * References: In general sufficient, besides the sentence starting with "This aspect has a positive impact on the employers...". This is a claim that needs a reference. Please also add at the bottom of the page a header "References" with in the line below the following:
 * Other: Please check punctuation and spaces.
 * Ready to publish: because your article is about sharing economy, and the article Sharing economy already exists in Wikipedia, your article can't be published as we only have one article for a single subject. But in generally I would recommend you to look for parts of your article that you can add to the existing article. This I think can be done near the end of coming session.

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Kameell (talk) 13:48, 30 November 2016 (UTC) 