User talk:Dianasam1109/Health technology in the United States

After evaluating the article's content, tone, and sourcing, I think the article still lacks a good structure. The article's content is too broad. I think the sections should be more structured, so the audience can find the information more easily and efficiently. For example, the topic of monitoring one's health can write under the section of medical technology instead of writing separately. The topics should be at least in a logical order to help the readers to follow the content easier. Some areas are also underdeveloped, for instance, the topic of medical technology only has one paragraph. I think this topic is relevant to health technology in the United States. Therefore, I think it should talk more about its history, development, and important events in this area. The article is written neutrally since most information is from credible sources, such as the World Health Organization. Lastly, I think the article has cited properly and used credible sources.

Some other reliable sources can be used for the article:

Wachter, Robert. (2015). The Digital Doctor: Hope, Hype, and Harm at the Dawn of Medicine's Computer Age. McGraw Hill Education: New York, NY.

https://www.nlm.nih.gov/nichsr/hta101/HTA_101_FINAL_7-23-14.pdf