User talk:Dickerson.219/sandbox

=Instructor Comments No. 2=

Well-written

 * Needs writing in subsections
 * Hoping to see more information on the history of it.
 * Instead of using quotes, rephrase, summarize and simplify it.
 * Revitalization should be under history
 * Neighborhood Plans can be under history

Verifiable with no original research

 * No issues here.

Broad in its coverage

 * Again, would like to see some reorganization

Neutral

 * No issues here.

Stable

 * No Comments.

Illustrated

 * Fill in places where photos should go, but don't code them as galleries. That is distracting.

164.107.47.208 (talk) 17:22, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:22, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Columbus, City Of, "Near Southside Area Plan 2011." Columbus.gov. 29 Nov. 2011. Web. 12 Nov. 2014. .

"Healthy Neighborhoods." Healthy Neighborhoods. Web. 12 Nov. 2014. .

Good Outline, but I was hoping for more content so its difficult for me to provide comments.


 * Good Pickup on Livingston Park on John's Page. Combine both of your pages onto this one or his. It will make your lives easier.
 * Instead of quoting so much from pages, try to figure out a way to streamline it.
 * Demographics: Good information, but where is it from? What year? If it's City-Data, I'd suggest you use the Census not them. I don't like City Data
 * Check out the Dispatch - lots of good info about Near South Neighborhoods there.
 * Look at Sanborn and Baist Atlas maps to see if you can figure out the old subdivisions and what the area looked like historically.

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 20:58, 19 November 2014 (UTC)