User talk:Diego.Pa28/New sandbox

Shiraz's Peer Review - Hi Diego! I am a little bit confused on what the topic of your edits is, what is your reason for focusing on the Angolan Associations? Maybe give some context to help understand its relevance or a few sentences further specifying what the Angolan Associations' roles were. Also, there is a grammar error in your third sentence: delete "was" in "was consisted". Other than that, good job using a neutral tone!

Gurshaant's peer review: Diego, I think your topic is phenomenally important and understated. The inclusion of associations humanizes the work. Genuinely enjoyed your piece and learned a lot. I can't wait to see it grow. I hope to see you expand more, perhaps on the economic, social, and political impacts of Angolans within Portugal. The page for this seems to include some data, but I think it would be extremely beneficial to further it. I noticed that you have only cited two sources. I'd advise on including more-- because regardless if you are reading an incredible amount of other information, continuous sourcing of one academic journal may come off as bias. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.158.1.180 (talk) 05:50, 11 April 2019 (UTC)