User talk:DillenAbbe/Social determinants of health

Duplication of material about employment
Hi, DillenAbbe,

I left a comment on your main Talk page a little while ago, which really belongs here--just wanted you to alert you that it's there. (It was a suggestion to name your new section Employment rather than Work.)

I was just reviewing the Economics section of the article and it struck me that the second paragraph in that section (pasted below) is now quite similar to your own material. Do you think it should perhaps be deleted?

As one's job or career is a primary conduit for both financial and social capital, work is an important, yet under represented, factor in health inequities research and prevention efforts. There are many ways that a job can affect one's health, such as the job's physical demands, exposure to hazards, mechanisms of employment, compensation and benefits, and availability of health and safety programs. In addition, those who are in steady jobs are less likely to face poverty and its implications and more likely to have access to health care.

Please let me know your thoughts.

Thanks,

RoxanneLIS

RoxanneLIS (talk) 19:05, 6 December 2023 (UTC)