User talk:Dillon davidson/sandbox

Nicole article feedback
Hi, Dillon!

You have a good start here! There isn't much to comment on yet, but I can see that you are working with a neutral, balanced tone and incorporating sources throughout your addition, which are both great.

Some things to consider as you continue improving this are:
 * Organization. So far, this looks like it's mostly about the developer...will "Developer" or "Project beginnings" be a section you add? What else do you plan to add from the resources you've found? I remember there was some information about the square footage, how much would be allotted for business vs. residential, etc.
 * you will want to proofread carefully--look for fragment sentences, capitalization, punctuation, spelling (once you have everything written that you would like to include)
 * one small reference note is that it's standard for the in-text reference link to come immediately after the information it's a source for rather than immediately before it

I hope these notes are helpful, and I look forward to seeing the final version of this! Nicoleccc (talk) 02:23, 15 February 2019 (UTC)