User talk:Dinofunsaur

Language tone in articles
I would like to request that you use a more formal (I would personally say encyclopedic) tone of writing in the various amusement ride articles you have contributed to. A lot of the articles you have added to sppear to external readers more as "Dinofunsaur's Impressions of Ride X" as opposed to "Wikipedia's Fact-based Article for Ride X".

As one of the more extreme examples I have come across, I'll use Afterburner (ride) as an example. This article uses personal pronouns ("I have...", "You can..."), and reads to me like a one-sided chat about the ride. I'd suggest having a look at Manual of Style and Guide to writing better articles.

I don't mean this to diss your contributions, the information is in most cases excellent. We just need to wrap it up in a neat little package. -- saberwyn 07:44, 28 January 2007 (UTC)

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