User talk:DiosXMachina/sandbox

The detail that you put into this page is clear! I really enjoyed reading your in depth plot description. However, I think you made need a source (or a few, depending on what you can find) throughout that section. This is because you can't technically use original thought or research, and this section seems like it may be based solely on personal knowledge. I think your following sections are really good ideas and sum up your sources quite nicely. If you wanted to expand on them a little bit you could, but I don't think you have to. Great job! --Lnmmack (talk) 17:11, 31 March 2019 (UTC)