User talk:Dirigibleplums

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zeshan Shakar (June 5)
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Celestina007 (talk) 00:53, 5 June 2021 (UTC)

Kebabnorsk
Hello Dirigbleplums. Nice work at Kebabnorsk, and especially impressive for your first contribution to Wikipedia. I wanted to note a couple of things that may help you with future editing. Wikipedia uses sentence case for section titles, so for instance "Current Immigration Statistics" should be capitalized as "Current immigration statistics". A good page to bookmark is Manual of Style, which is the style manual for (English) Wikipedia. In this case, the relevant guideline is Manual of Style. I refer to the Manual of Style whenever I'm in doubt over how to format, capitalize or spell something on Wikipedia.

I converted your references to Knut & Kjeldstadli 2008 to use a shortened form after the first reference. You can see what I did here. The main advantage of this is that the full reference only has to be written out once. Citation templates and Help:References and page numbers are good pages to check out.

I may trim the article a little bit, but overall you are off to a very good start. If you have any questions, feel free to reply to me here or at my talk page. Cheers. Rublov (talk) 19:13, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Zeshan Shakar
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:03, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Zeshan Shakar


Hello, Dirigibleplums. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Zeshan Shakar".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 19:58, 17 December 2021 (UTC)