User talk:Divo608/club tennis

wow...i want to join.... seriously, this was informative and not too wordy. the information answered any questions i might have had but quite honestly... it doesnt sound like too much fun... i would add some personality to it... something that indicates everyone has a blast... and that would make them want to join in the fun... the business part is good for business majors... but this is an extracurricular sport and activity... and it should also be fun.the costs, the time committments, the selection process... all are clearly spelled out and put forth for those who are interested. lets play ball... lets make some raquet...love, love, duece??? something catchy and funny that shows the personality of the team... would be my  charge.. claudia gerner... woman athlete extrordinaire...ho ho ho

fter reading this, I feel like the CU Club Tennis program is finally defined. The few matches I've observed made me wonder if there was a code of conduct in place; and, in fact, there is a very strict set of rules.Gnewc44 (talk) 18:48, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

In a message dated 12/12/2008 3:16:04 PM Central Standard Time, LLoichinger@mcpasd.k12.wi.us writes: I was very impressed with the page. It was very organized and clear so that it was understandable and informative. I feel anyone interested in joining the club team would have all of their questions answered and if not, she gave people's names and numbers that they could call for further information. The only thing that was not discussed was how or what the A and B teams were. A reference was made to them, but not how they came to be. Lisa Loichinger —Preceding unsigned comment added by Gnewc44 (talk • contribs) 21:27, 12 December 2008 (UTC)

Overall this is a very informative and interesting article on the CU Tennis Club. It is nice to know that the college expects those who represent them be well educated, as well as good in their sport. I especially liked the linking of pertinent information which you employed. One link that may need to be added, however, is to the location of the (4) Williams Village Courts, which could be useful for those wishing to try out.

Some areas of English that you may wish to address: Concerning the first paragraph,sentence one, move the "in" at the end of the sentence to before the word which. A sentence should never end in a preposition. Sentence two leaves me asking "Is one of the primary goals really to attend practice, or are the goals to compete in tournaments and play at advanced levels by regularly attending team practice sessions. Sentence three, since you have chosen to use the words "there and variety" (plural), the verb to follow must also be plural "are", not is. Also the word played is past tense and should be replaced with the word playing for present tense, or even better by competing.

In paragraph 2 and 3 you mention that 15 boys and 15 girls will make up the team. I can't see where this same information is needed in both paragraphs. Perhaps in paragraph 3, simply say 30 members. In much the same note, under paragraph 4 and 8 you mention the $100 club dues. I believe in the Membership Requirements, simply say pay club dues and leave the mention of the $100 to the Dues section.

This article really is very enlightening and well done, but since you asked for my help I felt compelled to do my best to help you. English has always been one of my strong points, so here you go! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Uncle RonN (talk • contribs) 23:52, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

The information is communicated very well however does seem to be missing a couple details like when the tryouts are just so people can know up front when to be ready for them, and maybe some detailed stats on how the team has done in the past instead of simply saying that the team is very competitive. The better a team is already always helps to get better athletes in the future.Lilmac1199 (talk) 19:50, 23 December 2008 (UTC)cuzmatt