User talk:DjDetski

To anyone who reads my user page, this page is not directly related to me (the user). Instead, I am using it as an experimental test area for an article I am writing. I would be extremely grateful if anyone who can spare a bit of time to a new user could proof-read this page and maybe outline what parts of the page need changing or improving. The page is obviously not completed yet and needs further work and there are a few areas that I need some help in.

Primarily, I need assistance with the references section as I am slightly unsure if the references I have used are good material and if the formatting style is correct.

I am hugely grateful to anyone who can lend a little time and assistance to just give the article a quick scan and maybe give me a few pointers on what I can improve on.

Many thanks. DjDetski (talk) 14:59, 6 August 2010 (UTC)