User talk:Djwa319/sandbox

Anna Lunger peer edit: If information is available, an idea is to add more about the applications of 3D print farms, even if just briefly DJ: I would worry about getting too far into that because it is a different topic, but at the very least I will include a hyperlink to the print farm page


 * good organization of topics

DJ: Okay, I'll smooth it out
 * slightly confused on this wording: "Users have the opportunity to use granularity up to tracking each individual spool"

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The content is great but your article could use some tweaks to match Wikipedia style. For example, this sounds like an ad for OctoFarm:

"OctoFarm also integrates with a growing list of OctoPrint Expansions to improve the level of control offered from the printer hosting service at a print farm scale." DJ: I see where you're coming from, I think I'm going to leave it for now because it is in the "features" section so it is going to end up sounding a bit like an advertisement regardless.

You could also clean up the writing a little bit. I know what you meant, but someone else could read this section and think there are three different requirements:


 * 1) "...requires a server to run the service..."
 * 2) "...is recommended to be run on a small form factor desktop computer at a minimum..."
 * 3) "...possible to run on a Raspberry Pi..."

DJ: Gotcha

Jason Peer Edit
Possibly add a general section and header for the first piece of text. In required resources, you stated Octofarm in three consecutive sentences possibly use "they" to reference it. Maybe add more about the details about the company, the owner, where it originated, etc.

DJ: Sounds good to both.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by JasonVu123 (talk • contribs) 01:21, 21 June 2022 (UTC)