User talk:Dkap07/sandbox

Dejas Edits:
Mate Choice in Humans Bit: I agree with the removal of the sentence in the first paragraph. For your first addition, do you think it may be better to refer to the strategies being based on 'sex' rather than gender? I could see either working, but using gender in your addition counters the use of male and female in the sentence before. It just seems inconsistent. While I think both could work, for this article they seem to use sex all the time so I would stick with using sex instead of gender, although I see this being a complex use of the word. For the larger addition you made, I think it is a great piece of information. The only comments I have are little: deleting 'in humans' at the end of the first sentence (it's repetitive), making the second sentence a little more clear (possibly something more along the lines of the diverse niches humans have evolved to occupy both ecologically and geographically), comma after separation and after consciousness in the third sentence...or possibly even combining this sentence with the prior sentence for clarity sake.

Female Mate Choice Bit: Great replacement for the prior use of 'particular'! I do think the additional sentence you included is important, but it can be confusing if you keep it where it is. I would suggest moving it elsewhere in the article, or the broader section, but I'm not sure where. Maybe in the intro part titled "Mate Choice in Humans"?

Short-term Mating Bit: Can you please explain this part a little more to me? I'm confused a bit about it. The section seems as though it should be simple, but I'm getting caught up in it.

Long-term Bit: I think it's great all around!

Response to Peer Review
1. I agree I should change gender to sex in the first sentence 2. I will delete "in humans" at the end of the sentence 3. I will work on making the second sentence clearer and include comments about divers niches we've evolved in 4. Will consider moving the additional sentence I included in  female mate choice part into the general "mate choice in Humans" section 4. Im the short term mate choice section I was trying to provide different examples of what multiple mate choice could be. Even if a women has been married she can still partake in multiple mates (for example if she gets divorced and mates someone else). I think you're right though that I worded it a bit oddly and should revisit it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dkap07 (talk • contribs) 04:50, 26 November 2018 (UTC)