User talk:DkendraS

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VerdantAurum's Sexual Anorexia Article Peer Review
Hi DkendraS, I couldn't seem to find your draft for the Sexual Anorexia article, but no worries. I looked over both the sexual anorexia page as well as your bibliography sandbox for the article. Firstly I would like to say that your additional sources for the Sexual Anorexia page look great. They are all fairly recent sources, being within the 2000s, which the article seems to be in dire need of since many of its sources are from the 1990s, and candid research into sex and sex disorders has had an uptick in our current century. Just remember to remain unbiased when making your new additions. The Empircal Data and Causes sections of the article both seem rather sparse. The Empircal Data section lacks detail on what little data collected and research done that it states there is, and the Causes section is rather sparse. Consisting of a single sentence, the Causes section greatly needs expansion on perhaps how these events stated in the section lead to sexual anorexia. To me, this seems particularly interesting. I think this is a rather fascingation topic, and I look forward to seeing your additions!

VerdantAurum (talk) 03:54, 1 March 2021 (UTC)