User talk:Dlanz2/sandbox

For the article that is being evaluated it does not show signs of the work submitted being biased at all the work shows a neutral argument. The format and the citation was done correctly, the format was done properly and as for the citations they are included in the sandbox. Looking at the sandbox the edits do feel substantial to what the article is talking about. For each of the edits that were made they do include a citation for the text. As far as the language go everything seems clear and easy to understand, also has correct spelling and is worded well.

Bsimm1 (talk) 17:06, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Byron SimmonsBsimm1 (talk) 17:06, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Review: (Eric Robinson) 1.) The edit is neutral. It does not sway the leader in any direction. 2.) Working citations are included with the edits. 3.) The edits made to the article are substantial. The edits add information to both the lead section of the article and the king section of the article. The edits include the citation's where the information is paraphrased from. 4.) The edits seem to be worded well, I didn't catch any errors. Just keep an eye out for the quotes included in the King section, I know Wikipedia is weird about quotes. Everything looks good to me. Erobi2 (talk) 17:20, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
I appreciate the feedback from both editors. I tried to create the best feeling of neutrality that I could and I am happy to hear that it feels that way. When it comes to the citations I feel that even though that Wikipedia created the citations listed I will most likely include the citations from my annotated bibliography as well in order to ensure proper credit is given. I will keep in mind what Eric said about the quotations under the King section. I will review and ensure that it is within the guidelines that Wikipedia has set. It is good to know that the language is done well. I will be sure to review it myself once I change the King section and any other that I catch during my own review. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dlanz2 (talk • contribs) 17:31, 1 May 2018 (UTC)