User talk:Dlit19/sandbox

peer review- Shayna - try adding more information for the early life section - add dates - talk more about her contributions to women sufferage family matters section - why did her father need to be taken care of? Other than Aeronautics - how did she get to this point/what made her get involved in this? more of her efforts? need to write a lead section, include a good summary of the person, start with an intro sentence that states article topic concisely and accurately. then Summarizes all major points in the article making sure the information in the lead section is also mentioned in the article. Has a lot of good information, good job! --Shaynacodd (talk) 03:38, 25 October 2019 (UTC)Shayna Codd

Peer Review
I love the additions you made in your article. They really add a new perspective on the life of Kathrine Wright. Especially with the family matters section as you added three paragraphs of information. I would make sure you add five sources because I only see four. Make sure to add hyperlinks, as they will enhance the quality of your page. You need to add in-text citations before you go public. The content looks really good and you made good changes overall, but add in the citations and hyperlinks to make it a more developed page.-Beechnj