User talk:Dls224/Evaluate an Article

Feedback on Article Evaluation
Overall, this is an excellent article evaluation. You have carefully addressed the criteria suggested for evaluating an article and, as a result, you have identified a number of issues with the article, which you summarize in the "overall" section of your evaluation. You have likewise identified a number of ways in which you could help to improve the article.

"Gaelic music" could potentially be a very large topic and article, particularly if it's covering Irish, Scottish, and Manx, and if "music" is understood broadly to include song and possibly dance (since music and dance are often not separate concepts in many cultures, including Gaelic culture). You are obviously not going to be able to write a thorough article on this subject on your own and during the time we have left in our course! However, given how underdeveloped this article is, I think it would be wise to start by thinking of the different subtopics that might be included in an article on Gaelic music, as well as a logical order for them. It might help to look at other articles that might be comparable (e.g., Music of Scotland or Basque music (trying to think of some traditional musical cultures that aren't specifically tied to a nation-state). I think it would be worth suggesting some of these topics in a "talk page" comment and then pick one or two to start developing for our course assignment.

Good work! CBFraoch (talk) 15:17, 11 November 2023 (UTC)