User talk:Dmajdic

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Predrag Keros (June 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ZI Jony was:

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Warm Regards, ZI Jony (talk) 16:10, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Ways to improve Predrag Keros
Hi, I'm Rosguill. Dmajdic, thanks for creating Predrag Keros!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. This article needs some editing to conform to Wikipedia's Manual of Style. In particular, the lead needs to be rewritten to give a proper introduction to the subject (see WP:LEAD), and the list of awards should be moved into a separate section from Biography. Additionally, some content, such as the claim that Keros is a "renaissance man" may violate Wikipedia's neutrality policy (see also WP:PEACOCK

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Rosguill talk 22:46, 2 September 2018 (UTC)