User talk:Dman F1

Edits containing words not necessary
Hi

Sorry to have to put a downer on your otherwise fine work on the articles you have edited.

Wikipedia does not really like words that "big up" a person such as weasel words or peacocking such as "is famed for", "his aggressive style" or "dominant performance". It is better to use "is known for", "his driving style" or "in his performance".

In the time it has taken for me to write this though I notice you have removed some of them lol

anyway happy editing and welcome to Wiki

Chaosdruid (talk) 21:22, 23 June 2010 (UTC)