User talk:Dmarenas/sandbox

Isaac's review: 1. What does the article (or section) do well? - Great, simple description of what MacMahone squares are. - Great, easy description of the rules.

2. What changes would you suggest overall? - Add a picture of the MacMahone square so it is easier to visualize. - Maybe add subtitles to the variants to make it easier to spot. - Add more historical information if you deem it necessary

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? - A ton of pictures would drastically improve the readability, and description of the page. This would include a picture of the squares and possibly different variants if possible. - Someone coming to this page may be looking for rules so I would definitely add more description.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! - Yes! Sometimes simple is better. The shorter sentences and paragraphs make this an easier read than it might be when grouping a lot of text together.

Kolby's review:

1. What does the article (or section) do well? - Have a unique topic I haven't heard about before.

2. What changes would you suggest overall? - Explain the workings of MacMahone square more. Add visual examples of the game, and maybe a step-by-step tutorial on how that game is played. Add more information about the history and evolution of MacMahone squares.

3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? - Add pictures of MacMahone squares being played, with explanations of the moves.

4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know! - There are many different unique topics for articles.