User talk:Dmose006/sandbox


 * Use headings so the viewer can see the divisions between topics more clearly. The sandbox looked like a paragraph because there was no headings in Bold font.
 * It looked too plain for my taste. Needs a pop of color. Try adding a picture or two!
 * You had good information about the artist. Perhaps give some names and dates of the artwork she made.
 * I saw some very minor grammar errors, so go through it again and edit.

This is not formatted correctly. If you do not know how to add headings, then rewatch the training or ask Shalor to help. And, you need a LOT more content. Nstrathman (talk) 06:38, 22 May 2019 (UTC)