User talk:Dmunene/sandbox

Title of article
There is usually a policy explaining the use of common names for wikipedia article titles, It is highly likely that someone or shall always will come searching for Xstatic and not her real name "Gloria Edna Mecheo" as used in the title currently. So consider changing the title when putting the article in its main name space. But remember the real name should always be in the very first paragraph.

Additions
In the capital interview, there is mention of her having a baby. You could include here baby's name. Circumstances of her baring the baby which happen to be a tumor that had threatened her uterus removal.These circumstances are unique and rare in nature and thats why IMO they should be included in the article.

Also add, the parents reactions to her choosing music as a career...She also says she would like to pursue Law at the Kenya school of law.You should mention that as well. There are also other reliable sources on line that I have come across that could help with expansion of the article.

For instance:
 * http://www.izvipi.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=642:congrats-kenyan-female-rapper-xtatic-signed-to-sony-music-entertainment&catid=35:c-profiles&Itemid=27
 * http://www.mtviggy.com/articles/xtatic-thrills-kenyan-hip-hop-fans/
 * http://allafrica.com/stories/201208100955.html

Otherwise, you are fairing on well with the Wikipedia writing. ₫ӓ₩₳  Talk to Me.   Email Me.  06:33, 27 August 2012 (UTC)