User talk:Dmvela/Acute eosinophilic pneumonia

Peer Review
Lead section: I really like how you expanded on the original text by rewriting for readability, and how you provided more detail on the pathogenesis. My only suggestion here might be to change malaise and myalgia to something more plain language, though this is probably just stylistic preference.

Treatment/History sections: I like the concise treatment summary. In terms of organization, maybe it would work better to put the history/diagnostic criteria before treatment?

My only other general suggestion is to hyperlink some of the more technical terms to existing Wikipedia pages. Overall a great basis for the article page so far, and a needed expansion on the original text. Looking forward to more! Drexden (talk) 01:53, 8 January 2024 (UTC)