User talk:Dnmcknight

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel M. Albert (January 6)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

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KJP1 (talk) 18:21, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Daniel M. Albert


A tag has been placed on Draft:Daniel M. Albert, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. Legacypac (talk) 19:57, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Daniel M. Albert
Hello Dnmcknight -- Thanks for submitting your draft on Daniel M. Albert. I have rewritten the text to remove the promotional tone noted by the reviewer, and accepted the article. However there are some details not apparently present in the sources that you provided which are marked with "cn" (citation needed); if you can provide sources for these that would be very helpful. Unsourced material is often challenged and removed to avoid inaccuracy, especially in the biographies of living people. Regards, Espresso Addict (talk) 07:11, 27 March 2018 (UTC)