User talk:DoNorth61

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Radka Donnell, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 00:05, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
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As reviewing administrator,  I accepted the article-- I notice there is a corresponding article in the Italian WP, and she is clearly notable. .

However, there are some major improvements urgently needed. Principally, do not use a link to the Italian WP as a source--rather, copy the references from it. If gives some key refs. that are missing in your article

Second, make absolutely certain you have not used Close paraphrase for any of the critical evaluations or judgments. If there is, rewrite that part from scratch, changing not just the words, but the arrangement into sentences and the sequence of ideas.  DGG ( talk ) 00:10, 29 June 2013 (UTC)