User talk:DocJML

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DocJML, good luck, and have fun. – Jnanaranjan Sahu (ଜ୍ଞାନ) talk 21:04, 13 February 2014 (UTC)

Your page provide much more unique and update information about organic electronics compared with the existing one. The introduction part in quiet understandable for the nonprofessional people but there are some grammar mistakes for the definition: Organic electronics is a field of material science concerning small molecules or polymers that has electrical property, or small molecules or polymers that shows conductivity, where “has” and “shows” probably should be corrected to be “have” and “show”. The same kind of the mistakes also appear in other parts. Additionally, it will be better if you can rewrite the sentence of “ Besides, people also …” in your introduction part since I did not find any parallel relations between this sentence and the first sentence and people deservedly take your second sentence as a part of the definition if you use “besides” but apparently it is not. Other than these, your introduction does present a general picture of the organic electronics. The content part of your page is pretty informative and well organized. The history is very comprehensive. All sections have a justified length. Your job to link the important terms/concepts to the respective Wikipedia pages makes your article very easily to read for non-experts. At the same time, I noticed you persistently do this work for most of the terms/concepts, but some terms/concepts such as Ching W. Tang, OLED, film which also should be linked as their first appearance. Mover over, some concepts, for instance, poly(p-phenylene vinylene), condensation can be linked to their Wikipedia page, respectively. For some terms that have no existing Wikipedia pages such as Poly(3-alkythiophenes) and Br6A, it will be a good idea if you can provide any external resources to demonstrate them. Your highlighted examples are appropriate and help your sketch of the whole picture very well. Your original pictures and figures are very informative and of high quality. Your Chemdaw structures and the scheme of the bilayer OLED are very impressive and informative. But I am not sure whether the pictures of Br6A and red power Rubrene-OFET are your own work. If no, I suggest you ask for the permission for the authors. Your references include non-journal sources and are absolutely complete. Overall, you did a fabulous job. Your page is very updated, informative and comprehensive. What you need to do for improvement of your revision is correcting grammar mistakes and linked some important terms/concepts as I talked above to the appropriate resources. For each of the application, if you can give people one or more examples of the specific polymers and their structure information, that will be perfect. I find one paper from Sigma-Aldrich. It provides many organic electronics polymer structure information. Hope it can help for your revision.

http://www.sigmaaldrich.com/content/dam/sigma-aldrich/materials-science/material-matters/material_matters_v2n3.pdf Wjunqi (talk) 03:08, 28 February 2014 (UTC)