User talk:Doctor Gina/COVID-19 pandemic in louisiana

COVID in Louisiana Feedback
Hi -- Great work so far! I've got some feedback for you. It's just two little things involving phrasing.

First paragraph - make sure when you move this over to have it in past tense.

Third to last paragraph ("Gov Edwards partnered with..."): change "who've" to "who have" or "who had" unless this is a direct quote...in which case, it'll need quotes.

This is some really great work! Let me know if you need any help moving the sections into the article! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:47, 11 August 2020 (UTC)