User talk:Documentator20

Shriners additions
The two documents you added do not address leadership and financial issues. The one purportedly about the Jesters does not even address the group by name within the document. It says "a men's organization", so there's no way you can even use that, because you're synthesizing who it is that is involved. Moreover, the Jesters are a club within the Shrine, and have nothing to do with the leadership of the Shrine group with which they are affiliated.

The other document about defrauding the hospital says a lot about the individual. There is absolutely nothing in the document that even alleges that the Hospital was complicit in the incident. Also, the hospitals are administered separately from the Shrine organizations, and therefore have no relation to Shrine "financial practices". The way you claim it, it's like saying that if I steal money from you, it's your fault for letting me do it, and that just doesn't make sense. MSJapan (talk) 14:48, 11 February 2009 (UTC)