User talk:Doglovers1234/Problematic smartphone use/Karaj623! Peer Review

User talk- Kara Johnson
Overall my partner did a great job making edits and citing them in the sandbox. When reviewing what I needed to write about in the peer review there was not too much that I could point out that needed fixing. The few things that this writer could fix would be to add a lead section, and while looking at the questions about the lead section I realized I needed to add one of my own. Other than the lead section, this writer could add a little bit more overall to the article. I think it would be more beneficial to add another source as well to make the writers article more well rounded. Overall this writer did a great job editing! Karaj623! (talk) 22:09, 9 December 2023 (UTC)