User talk:Dohiarmon

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karen Kornienko (December 6)
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78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 17:30, 6 December 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karen Kornienko (December 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nikolaiho was:

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 Nik ol ai Ho ☎️ 21:26, 7 December 2017 (UTC)

Response to email Draft:Karen Kornienko
Hello there, The reason why I declined your article is because when I skimmed the end of the biography section, I saw a bunch of quotes giving praise to the artist, which is okay maybe for one sentence but not for so many. This gives the impression of the article being promotional and not neutral-which all Wikipedia articles must be. Another thing that would benefit the article is a better layout. The biography section is very large. Perhaps instead, you could subdivide it by making a "Life" section which is further subdivided ino "early career", etc. and then an "awards and recognitions" section. Also, many of the references you sited as from the subjects website, which is not considered as secondary reliable source. Sources like that should not be included. If those sources are omitted, then there are not many other sources which establish the subjects notability. So in fine:
 * 1) Remove potentially biased/promotional-sounding material.
 * 2) Add reliable secondary sources that establish notability.
 * 3) Consider changing the formatting, ie. Headings.

 Nik ol ai Ho ☎️ 21:58, 9 December 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Karen Kornienko (January 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by The Drover's Wife was:

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The Drover&#39;s Wife (talk) 10:01, 20 January 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Dohiarmon concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Dohiarmon, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:34, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Dohiarmon


Hello, Dohiarmon. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Dohiarmon".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  21:10, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Karen Kornienko concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Karen Kornienko, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:23, 22 January 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Karen Kornienko


Hello, Dohiarmon. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Karen Kornienko".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. kingboyk (talk) 01:37, 23 February 2020 (UTC)